Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 20, 2021
Water
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Hi Ahlia,Ethan here from korimako and I like how you are learning about water and its importance because water is very important to stay alive.There is some things I would add to this blog, More of a catchy title like wasting water or watery water also you should add a question at the end of your blog to start a conversation with the reader. Keep up the hard work. Why do some countries have chlorine in there water but others don't?
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